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Billy smiled at him but it was nasty. Finally, he spoke – softly, menacing, 10mg Petcam, “Don’t you remember I told you I’d be here earlier to set things up for the presentation?” The smile broke into a chuckle, mostly to himself.

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He had worked out all the bugs and now it could be done. With proud ceremony and a bottle of champagne next to him, he turned on the computer and attached a small box into the USB port. The monitor was off.

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Joel’s breathing did accelerate but he didn’t move otherwise. Soon, the tree was accompanied by a lovely house, a big front yard and a dog. His eyes grew bright with triumph and passion as he slowly reached for the save button, 20mg Petcam. With the screen dark once more, they both stared, counting this moment as a milestone in computer tech. At least Joel did, buy Petcam Over The Counter. He didn’t realize Billy was counting it as a milestone in his own future.

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“But I didn’t die. That’s what upset you when I first saw you,” Joel realized as he smiled at Billy with mocked-up admiration. Buy Petcam Over The Counter, “That’s right,” Billy answered, taking his first drag. “But that’s alright. 200mg Petcam, The fire in the car will blow it up any minute.” He waved the cigarette and smiled at Joel as if they were in agreement with his death.

Joel was frightened but he struggled to keep his mind alert and calm. “Well…how come I don’t remember it or see myself in the car now?” The pain suddenly got worse.

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“Exactly,” Billy said, pointing the cigarette at him.

“So now you’ll present this as your own invention, since you’re the only one that knows.”

Billy frowned in thought. “You’re a genius, Joel, but never good at practical details. I counted on that,” he smiled at Joel. “You really should have put the damn thing in a safe.” He was almost loving with his advice, buy Petcam Over The Counter.

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With that out of they way, he abandoned Billy’s evil and, without a computer, visualized himself in his car. He screamed loudly until he saw a car stop. Buy Petcam Over The Counter, A man got out, ran down to the ditch and pulled him out. Moments later, the car exploded.

After his recovery, Joel stashed the gadget away in a safe place. It needed a few adjustments.

Billy was serving ten years for embezzlement. Joel had an idea his evil wasn’t specialized.

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  1. June 4, 2010

    I didn’t enjoy this story very much, I’m sorry to say. It wasn’t a pleasant experience. I got a little way in and couldn’t read it all word for word. The story seems unbalanced somehow. When a story is about evil, then there has to be a reward, a very theta payoff for the reader. There was no payoff. I didn’t feel there was any room for me – as though I was intended to be simply let the story roll over me.

    There is a grain of a story here but it needs work. I noticed a few wrong verb forms, as well.

    I think the thing that bothered me most was the mounting infliction of pain in the protagonist’s legs.

  2. Barbara Carmichael
    June 6, 2010

    What a great story. A cool twist!

  3. james pascale
    June 6, 2010

    should be published. Intensely interesting.

  4. Dusti
    June 6, 2010

    Where do I vote?

  5. marilyn
    June 6, 2010

    very well done!

  6. Anat Krier
    June 6, 2010

    This is an exciting story! I was very impressed.

  7. Jeanne Powers
    June 7, 2010

    Friggin’ brilliant! I definitely couldn’t stop reading. Quite an impact!

  8. Jeanne Powers
    June 7, 2010

    Didn’t see where the stars are to vote.

  9. June 8, 2010

    creative! different! A writer’s challenge, indeed an artist’s challenge, is to see what others do not see. The author has painted a picture – somewhat mysterious – of an alternate universe. An environment that is strangely alien to us normal people. I can understand a negative reaction to the story; it is definitely not a “Sally met Harry” type of story. It challenges our imaginations to keep up with the author’s invention.

  10. June 11, 2010

    Action packed and gripping!

  11. Reuben Quezada
    June 11, 2010

    Nice twist at the end, I got the feeling that he was re-living or experiencing something.. maybe out of body type thing, Billy showed up and you asked why? No answer at that point. Ok keep reading, legs heavy but from what? Had he been transported to an alien ship… Cool ending. Story was a little choppy and at times didn’t flow smoothly from one scene to another… Needs a little streamlining as the “seams” are too deliberate. I like the concept for sure…

  12. June 13, 2010

    The key to writing is to write. Let it rest and go back and edit until you are happy. Pick a place to send it and fire away! I am not a critic. I will just give a little feed back. The intro. was discriptive. The scenes were vivid and I saw through you eyes as the story unfolded. There was mystery that grabbed my attention and held it to the end. The plot was in the science fiction mode and I like this. Being an auditor I suspected the subject was thrown into an engram. The twist of controlling his perceptions by another persons ability to project his intentions via a computer to create a perceivable reality is really interesting! This could be coming up the line. The ending was abrupt leaving me expecting more. All in all, I liked it. Spelling and grammar come after the create in the final editing. Just write! If you like it to heck with it!! Then you take you lumps getting it sold. Ha!!

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